Pre-production: final edited version of the script

Throughout all the shoots, we have been constantly altering our initial script.

Although our final script turned out slightly different to the first one, we were able to use the first script as a template during the shoots to work with the actors and alter our script to give the main characters some depth.

Our script is developed from the script mentioned in the "Treatment: Scripting our sequence" blog post.

We changed the dialogue to develop our characters through the opening sequence and to build up a better sense of tension.

As an example, our group found that the line, "Rise and shine sleeping beauty" was too cheerful for the situation so we changed it to "Jess, it's time to get up."

We are more satisfied with the script now as it allows us to build up the characters and seems like a realistic conversation instead of being very stereotypical and exaggerated like our previous script.