We made an Animatic so that we were able to get a general idea about where the camera will be placed for each shot, as well as being able to make adjustments to a shot i.e. framing and composition if it doesn't look quite right. Since we did shot the pictures for our Animatic at the first designated location, we were able to get a sense of how we were going to film the shots.
After we made our animatic, we looked over it with criticisms that are listed below:
Student Reflections
While we were shooting and editing our animatic, we realised that there were certain issues that arose including:- Continuity errors:
- In some shots, the bed was left empty. To rectify this, we will ensure that Jess is always in the bed where appropriate.
- There were various issues in regards to Mise-En Scene. E.g. Posters on back wall constantly falling; "Monster Energy" cans stacked against wall fell over repeatedly
- The 2 lighting set-ups must be kept consistent, especially in scenes when using low key lighting. To enable this to be consistent we will use a lighting kit provided by the school.
- The alarm clock needs to be set to the right time each and every time we shoot the close ups of it (the clock) at the start.
- Be mindful of large mirror on wall, to avoid reflections of crew members and equipment.
- Suitable lighting needed so that actors are visible in low key lighting.
- Certain props are missing and therefore are not in
Staff Reflections
-Titles:
- There should be consistency in how the titles are sequenced.
- The intonation used in some of the lines does not quite fit the scenes mood, this is due to all of the dialogue being added in at a later date as a voice over and will not be a problem when filming the sequence.
- There should be more shot diversity
- There should be more cutaways
One major piece of feedback that we were given from staff is that there is a lack of movement in our sequence. This is mainly due to the limitations of an animatic's static nature and is hard to fix unless there are a variety of transitions between separate shots.
These are all things which will be taken into account when we move on to the film opening's construction.
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